ENGRD101. Fall 2024. Sections 27 & 31.
I love going on nighttime drives around my hometown, so I wanted to create a mixtape that would fit that situation. I named my playlist tl;dw (too long; didn’t write), so the rule I had to follow was that all of the song titles had to be acronyms. Since my mixtape was for a drive, […]
Read moreAfter talking with Professor Morgen, I realize the thesis should be relating to the techniques of drawing thats contrasting the two comics. Without changing about what difference I noticed about these two comics, I added visualization aspect that supports my original thesis. I also added a Hilary Chute quote which I missed the first time. … Continue reading “Revised Tracing Pages Reflection”
Read moreMy first step toward revision was the meeting with Professor Morgen regarding my narratives. He pointed out I can change my thesis from including downfalls in writing to be genuine in writing. I later went to the writing center with the instructor there suggesting myself writing the narratives right now is another example of admitting […]
Read moreI love baking, so I decided to represent my progress in this class as a cake. The first layer represents the knowledge about writing I already had before I took this course. The second layer represents the sketch assignments, because they were a good foundation for this class. Some of the thinking processes I used […]
Read moreWhen writing the part 1 narrative, I’ve already developed a thesis. And through feedback from teacher, help from writing center, my own revision, and the literacy narrative pt.2 which allows me to shift my emphasize and develope clearer structure all helped me continue polishing my thesis. In this essay written, I shift my focus furthermore […]
Read moreThe Halfa Kucha presentation was a very challenging yet rewarding task. Frankly, due to having many ideas on Spinning and Stitches as a whole, I do feel I chose an overtly ambitious topic, overestimating how long 3 minutes and 20 seconds actually was; this time seemed generous at first; however, I ended up needing more […]
Read moreOver the semester, my journey as a writer mirrored the human body, representing how multifaceted it is, with each task serving a different function. My Brain, the crux of my learning, is my final portfolio, which synthesizes all my understanding so far. The lungs represent the literacy narrative that adds structure and flow to my […]
Read moreThe revised literacy narrative allowed me to fix the choppiness I perceived in my old narrative by adding new content and revising old paragraphs, making them more concise. Creating my comic enabled me to emphasize key moments and identify them. I then put greater emphasis on these moments throughout the essay and attempted to make […]
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